I chose this video because my cousin is the one playing in it, and I feel really proud to see her on the handball court. Watching her run, pass, and shoot shows how much effort and passion she puts into the game. Handball is such an exciting and fast-paced sport — it requires teamwork, strategy, and quick thinking. In this video, you can see how she supports her teammates and always tries her best. I also admire how intense and dynamic the game is, with every second full of energy. I picked this video because it shows her dedication, talent, and love for handball.
You clearly explained why you chose the video (a personal reason: your cousin is in it), and that makes your post very authentic. You didn’t just say “because I know her”, but you also described what you see in her: effort, passion, supporting her teammates and being constant. You also identified key ideas of handball as a sport: it’s fast, it needs teamwork and quick thinking. That shows you understand the collective side of the game, not only the technical part.
To make it even better next time, try to: - Connect it a bit with what we are doing in class (for example: supporting passes, fast circulation, shooting). - Add one specific moment from the video that you liked (“when she…”), so your comment sounds more concrete.
But overall: very good work — well written, personal and thoughtful. ✅
This video remembers me the part of the class that we do handball, because we practice the shots that we can see in it. The thing that has caught my attention was the velocity of the passes that the players do between them. This sports is so funny but there are better sports and I am better, so I value the difficulty of the skills that they do in their small court.
Thanks for your comment. You have made a good connection between the video and what we do in class (shooting and passing in handball). That shows you are relating the content to your own practice 👏.
I chose this video because my cousin is the one playing in it, and I feel really proud to see her on the handball court. Watching her run, pass, and shoot shows how much effort and passion she puts into the game. Handball is such an exciting and fast-paced sport — it requires teamwork, strategy, and quick thinking. In this video, you can see how she supports her teammates and always tries her best. I also admire how intense and dynamic the game is, with every second full of energy. I picked this video because it shows her dedication, talent, and love for handball.
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DeleteYou clearly explained why you chose the video (a personal reason: your cousin is in it), and that makes your post very authentic. You didn’t just say “because I know her”, but you also described what you see in her: effort, passion, supporting her teammates and being constant. You also identified key ideas of handball as a sport: it’s fast, it needs teamwork and quick thinking. That shows you understand the collective side of the game, not only the technical part.
To make it even better next time, try to:
- Connect it a bit with what we are doing in class (for example: supporting passes, fast circulation, shooting).
- Add one specific moment from the video that you liked (“when she…”), so your comment sounds more concrete.
But overall: very good work — well written, personal and thoughtful. ✅
This video remembers me the part of the class that we do handball, because we practice the shots that we can see in it. The thing that has caught my attention was the velocity of the passes that the players do between them. This sports is so funny but there are better sports and I am better, so I value the difficulty of the skills that they do in their small court.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment. You have made a good connection between the video and what we do in class (shooting and passing in handball). That shows you are relating the content to your own practice 👏.
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